WELCOME.....This blog is for: 1) Chinese who want to improve their skills in English and 2) all others who want to share experiences they've had traveling in China.....I've been tutoring mainland students by computer for years.....They send emails weekly and I return edited versions......It's all free......In the process we've learned more about each other - our similarities, our differences.....So be brave and send a comment about the articles and photos you'll see here and then send some of your own.....Don't worry about the grammar; it can be smoothed out, and when the piece is ready, it'll be published right here. Hope to hear from you soon. (jgron_34209@yahoo.com) If, on the other hand, you'd like to Learn Chinese Online, click those three words. Mr G.
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View Article  Waiting for the Show to Begin (An Exercise for my Creative Writing Class)

(Written by a Chinese girl studying in England)

          As I waited in the wings - just before going on - my nervousness grew, and anxiety took over.  Out there the crowd of parents was waiting like a pack of hungry wolves - poised to pounce.  Their muttering and occasional coughing, the screeching, scraping noise of chairs being moved back-stage made me more apprehensive.  Biting my lips, a stale, chalky taste was left in my mouth.  My tight little costume felt itchy on my skin - like ants crawling across my flesh.

          Peeking through the curtain again, I saw the audience in the chairs, waiting like a flock of cultures anticipating the kill.  On the stage, they'd stirred up dust that whirled about aimlessly like fairies.  Without direction or purpose, those dust clouds seemed to be mocking me as I stood there nervously, filled with tension.  I glanced at the star of the show, and he was chewing his cheek in his anxiety - like a camel chewing his cud.

          The muttering of the people out there swelled to a crescendo like the roaring of the sea as they competed with each other to be heard, and behind me members of the c ast were frantically practicing their lines.  I could actually hear my heart in my ears as it pounded like a grandfather's clock - tick-tock-tick-tock-tick...

          The tension was growing by the second.  It would soon be time to go on, and the audience was quieter now.  I could just catch a low susurrus as they coughed, whispered and yawned.  There was a humming in the atmosphere, a buzzing like a swarm of hornets in a haze.

          My heavy stage makeup started to cake as one of the stagehands turned the spotlights on, and I could feel perspiration slipping down the cracks as I stood there waiting.  I felt caged in my crazy costume - like a chicken in a coop - hemmed in by the rest of the cast as they stood too close to me.  My pounding heart was pumping like a piston.

          The makeup upon my lips was unpleasant.  It had a metallic tang, and the powder on my face needed to be redone.  There were streaks in it now from the perspiration, and when the drops reached my mouth, they tasted salty.  I chewed my lip nervously, and could taste warm blood spurting into my dry mouth, as I'd actually bitten myself.  The humidity and moisture back-stage was a sharp contrast to how dry I felt inside.

          The twoo sweet aroma of my makeup started to bother me, and I got a whiff of salt and vinegar crisps emanating from the audience.  I sniffed my shirt to see if I was okay and instantly drew back, as there was a stench of stale sweat caused by my fears.  Quickly I inhaled a lungful of air even though it was filled with dust, and I started to cough and sputter.  My dry mouth was finally relieved as saliva poured in when I got the scent of the crisps the people out there were eating.

          As the lights faded into darkness, a moment of silence fell, and then - suddenly - there was a burst of noise on the still air as the band struck up.  At the first chords, I took a deep breath and made my entrance.

          The show had begun

View Article  August 6th Report on Olympic Games by a Volunteer

(Written by a university student in Beijing)

          The most important thing happening in Beijing right now is the Olympic Games, and most of the stations on local television will carry coverage of it.  Volunteers are everywhere.  It has been reported that 5,000,000 of them are helping.  I'm a helpdesk assistant in the hockey stadium and will have to work only if something goes wrong on the web.  That means that I have free time to visit many venues.  Yesterday I went to the tennis stadium near the hockey stadium and was lucky to see the super tennis star Federer training there.  I stood very close to him and that was thrilling.

          The Chinese people have a great passion for the Games.  When I watched a game in Greece on TV, there were only a few people there, but in Beijing, most of the tickets are sold in only a few hours.  Many people wait all night for ticket windows to open, and when I went to the hockey stadium to buy tickets for my family, the queue was about 500 meters long even though the game is not popular in China.  I got the tickets after standing under the sun for two hours in the hottest part of the day.  When I left, the queue had not gotten any shorter.  I guess that they just had to have tickets to an Olympic competition even though they didn't understand hockey.

          The opening ceremony will be held tomorrow.  I am looking forward to seeing the skyrockets, and I want to see the lighting of the Olympic torch.  Tomorrow will be an exciting day.

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